Bad Bad Bad Bad Boys. They Make Me Feel So Good.

When we meet characters on the page for the first time, it’s much like greeting new people in real life. We size them up based on the words the author uses, items strung together that fuel our imaginations, and we compartmentalize them. Do we like them? Or, do we relegate them to that place we slot people we don’t like in real life?

In fiction, there’s a lot of pressure to create clearly likable characters, people readers can root for, cry with and cheer along. If the reader doesn’t care about a character, they won’t turn the page. It’s easy to make a reader care about good people. They’re noble. Maybe they’re flawed, but in an appealing, relatable way that gets readers invested in the story.

But what about villains? Shouldn’t the reader care about them, too? Because I’ve always loved me some bad boys, I heartily assert that yes, they should care.

Bad people are trickier to write with nuance, because the reader is predisposed to dislike them. Anything the character does that is outside of the reader’s idea of ‘what is right/fair/just/acceptable’ risks aliening a whole segment of readers from the story. If a bad character can seduce readers in a believable way, it makes the story multi-dimensional. If I can make a reader relate to a bad character, I have a little internal celebration. Sympathetic bad people are writing crack to me.

I spent much of my earlier life on stage and only started writing again two-and-a-half years ago. I can’t help but approach writing as a student of theater. Some of my methods of character development incorporate theatrical tools. When I portrayed a character on stage, I always did a lot of homework outside rehearsal to achieve the desired performance. Here are a few tools that help me create complex bad characters, though they can work for any character.

Most people are not born villains (psycho/sociopaths excepted.) It is far more common for a thief to steal something trivial at first, for a murderer to commit a passionate act without thought of consequences, for a liar to grow their deviant art over time. When I decide where those things happened with a character and map a trajectory, I can always work in words and phrases that allude to that ‘sunlit time before she was a bad, bad person.’

Decide what’s to love about the character. As a writer, I love every character I create. If I don’t love her, I can’t make the reader hate her. With one bad character, I loved her sense of style and envied the way she carried herself. She was grace in the midst of chaos. In another case, I admired a bad guy for going for a noble dream, and I felt his heartbreak when he compromised.

People usually have reasons for what they do. As the writer, I have to know those reasons and build them into a believable motivation. A character becomes more complex when they don’t choose obvious motivations. Torturers do not have to enjoy what they do. People who embezzle aren’t always greedy. Mothers can make selfish short-term bargains for their children, thinking they will be able to better provide for them in the end.

Think of life examples. While I don’t base characters on a specific person, I do borrow from experience. If I know someone who has struggled with a particular issue, I interview that person for motivational clues. I study my own encounters with bad people, and I objectively try to understand the situation from their points of view. When I really inhabit a character, I can take a reader anywhere.

Throughout life, real people do good things and bad things. They dream of taking action but resist the impulse. In that teetering place in my own psyche, I usually find the perfect character in the person I could’ve been if I’d made a different choice. 

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Comment by Vicky Willenberg on February 16, 2013 at 10:42pm

I love this! Recently someone accused me of hating all characters that aren't fluffy.  "It's OK that you like the simple, happy characters most," he said.  That is so NOT how I feel.  But I do feel that the characters I "like" have to be identifiable in some way.  Of course I have not experienced everything a character has.  But I think I can be a pretty empathetic person- I can understand and imagine what someone experiences.  Having a character be an "asshole" just to be an asshole or giving them no redeeming qualities whatsoever is really hard to relate to.  For me, at least.

When an author invests the time into developing a character whose choices i don't agree with, whose motivations I can't relate to or whose actions leave my blood boiling YET helps me see where the character is coming from or how they got where they are I find myself slowly but surely crossing over to their team.  THAT'S great writing.  No, I don't need it to all be sunshine and rainbows,, but I want to KNOW and UNDERSTAND my characters- good, bad or somewhere in between.

Can't wait to read some of your bad bad bad bad boys.

Vicky

www.thepursuitofnormal.blogspot.com

Comment by Andra L Watkins on February 15, 2013 at 12:21pm

I'm looking forward to reading your book, Lance. Your blog posts are always entertaining, and they often take me to unexpected places.

Comment by Lance Burson on February 14, 2013 at 10:54pm

When I turned my novel over to a professional editor the forst thing she said was, "i usually wouldn't read something like this but you've made complicated, hard to like characters, enjoyable".

 

I agree.. everything I've read from your fertile mind has been interesting, original, and unique.

Whether it's a petualnt rock singer, a sociopathic killer or a seflish journalist, I try, as you do to make their stories worth telling, not their bios palatable to mainstream minds.

 

Great post. Your writing is terrific.

Comment by Andra L Watkins on February 14, 2013 at 10:00pm

Charlotte, I look forward to reading some of your fiction. Jessie, thank you so much for encouraging me to write this post. It forced me to think about my process, which I seldom do. :)

Comment by Jester Queen (Jessie Powell) on February 14, 2013 at 9:46pm

Andra, this is AWESOME. Your evil people are the most sympathetic I have ever seen. I can never quite hate them after I've seen them through human eyes. Which is saying something, since I grew up with a sociopathic sibling (and that's not a term I drop lightly) 

Comment by Charlotte Klein on February 14, 2013 at 4:38pm

Sympathetic bad people are writing crack to me.

Thank you so very much for this. This line in particular really makes me want to focus more on writing fiction and creating these kind of devilish, can't-help-but-like-them characters. The more complex, the better and it's not always so easy to bring that to life.

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